Overall, there is a good flow to this one making your delivery pretty smooth. There is little to no hesitancy and pronunciation sounds good.
Some basic grammatical errors came up ("...live in a beach..") We don't live in beaches we live at the beach. ("..playing the beach volleyball...") Don't need "the"
There was an issue with the word, "fresh" when talking about seafood. It sounded like you said, "freshen." This could be a grammatical error at the phrasal level or simply a pronunciation error.
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Overall, there is a good flow to this one making your delivery pretty smooth. There is little to no hesitancy and pronunciation sounds good.
Some basic grammatical errors came up ("...live in a beach..") We don't live in beaches we live at the beach. ("..playing the beach volleyball...") Don't need "the"
There was an issue with the word, "fresh" when talking about seafood. It sounded like you said, "freshen." This could be a grammatical error at the phrasal level or simply a pronunciation error.
Score: 4
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